This Is What It Looks Like When Ryan Bridger Critiques Your Work

Familiar with Ryan?  Search for “Shock Totem Drinking Game” and you’ll learn everything you need to know. He critiqued an old story of mine that was apparently so boring that he needed to jazz it up.

“What are you?” indeed.

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3 thoughts on “This Is What It Looks Like When Ryan Bridger Critiques Your Work

  1. LOL. That is an awesome crit. 😀 I have to admit to doodling on my own pages when I crit them, but I have never had the nerve to do so on the work of another writer – you should have that framed…

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